Essay Two.

This essay at first I thought would be easier than the first one, but then starting the essay it got difficult. I now understand what Jolly said that the difference between high school research papers and college research papers. I am still in high school and this is just my third paper that I am doing were I have to make my point and have something support me. I think that with the peer review it will really help me, because for the first paper it helped me a lot. The second essay for myself was hard to think of a subject to evaluate, because there are so many things out there to evaluate, from the begging of the paper to now i have changed it three times. I think that the last one was a better choice for me because I have experienced both, and so thats my thoughts on essay two.